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A Tale of Tails, 7-34
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A Tale of Tails, 7-34

Oct30
by Feretta on October 30, 2022 at 11:56 pm
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Scars

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  1. darkrealmer21
    darkrealmer21
    October 31, 2022, 3:32 pm | # | Login to Reply

    Oh oh me me fen! She emphasizing way too much control and forcing thinks when all she needs to do is let loose a little. Also she’s sweating bullets

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  2. Suihtil
    Suihtil Cod
    October 31, 2022, 11:56 am | # | Login to Reply

    Well, I was wrong. She has plenty of control. Buuut… her shaping needs a little work, methinks. It kind of looks like she made a mushy throne in a garden of dying vine-weeds.

    Still, my little fishy brain is very impressed! I did not give her enough credit.

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  3. Tia-Rie
    Tia-Rie
    October 31, 2022, 11:44 am | # | Login to Reply

    Well she definitely likes to show off, as for what she needs to work on, I am thinking control. She seems to put all she had into it and use so much and looks rather exhausted.

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  4. Mikhail
    Mikhail
    October 31, 2022, 5:10 am | # | Login to Reply

    Oh! Let my try to! First, I do not think she is showing off. I think, she is good, she does have a thing to show and she knows she’s put in a lot of work to learn what she can. But as her name suggests, Sonia Silverhair Ildara Miravani Sorenson Miravani does way too much of over work. Some part of it is redundant, which may look like that she is showing off, but probably the most of excessive work is “guessing”. I’d say, she needs to draw such impressive amount of essence we see on the scene, because she could not yet make this armchair at once, and she had to made several quick attempts in instant, that is why she looks worn out already.
    I know that because I’m doing the same right now 🙂
    Looking forward to the Fenavi’s lessons.

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  5. Thorn
    Thornbrier
    October 31, 2022, 5:01 am | # | Login to Reply

    It’s all rather crude. She needs to learn precision and efficiency, and probably stability. While solid enough to hold her up, I doubt it can withstand a strike.

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    • Tynach
      Tynach
      November 2, 2022, 10:23 am | # | Login to Reply

      Yeah, you saved me from making a long rambling top-level comment where I progressively try to refine what I’m trying to say. Precision, efficiency, and stability are key.

      However, one thing I will add is that I also think she needs to work on stamina – keeping a summons going for a lengthy period of time. Like what Fen had to do for Vix, keeping the cot going while transporting her in the rain.

      To an extent, better efficiency and stability will help with that – and precision will help with both of those other two. But she’s already starting to sweat a little just from summoning a chair and some crudely imagined background scenery.

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      • Thorn
        Thornbrier
        November 4, 2022, 8:01 am | # | Login to Reply

        Good catch, hadn’t noticed the sweat.

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  6. stuffycow2000
    stuffycow2000
    October 31, 2022, 4:47 am | # | Login to Reply

    Told to show off magic skills, has dance number and conjures chair.

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  7. Corby
    RevCorby
    October 31, 2022, 3:11 am | # | Login to Reply

    the first frame would make a great poster

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  8. Ainoko
    Ainoko Ironrose
    October 31, 2022, 1:13 am | # | Login to Reply

    She is showing off, knot good.

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